Final Pitch Video

This is us pitching our final idea for our title sequence with all the feedback corrected.

Final Pitch

This is our final pitch with all the feedback added.

Feedback from pitch

Here are the feedback sheets that Mr Grimsley and the class watching our pitch filled out in order for us to gain opinions on our idea.
We can see from what has been written that we
-made our target audience too low as people older than 25 may still enjoy this type of film.
-We need to apply Todorov's theory (Equilibrium, Disequilibrium and new Equilibrium) to our narrative to make it more clear to understand what happens at different stages in the film as our synopsis was very short.
-Consider the budget of our film maybe the budget is too low?
-Research further into a production company for our film
-Clarify our genre
-Work out if our film is exclusivley British.
-confirm a title.

First Pitch video

This is a video of me and Frankie pitching our title sequence idea to the class in which we will gain feedback.

First Pitch of Title Sequence Befor Feedback

This is mine and Frankies first pitch for our title sequence idea which includes everything that will be included in our title sequence. We was given feedback and will re-draft our pitch on the comments we were given back.